@Pullus
I would say go for it but it is over two times too long to be eligible lol ^^

I hope the judges don't count my submission words. Hopefully they don't count "it" and "the" as words(real writing tests don't).

If people make suggestions, I will write a short fanfic such as this one for a character they like....

There will be SIX winners.  You should definitely still enter. =]

Hmm, how about one for Oscar and his brother?

Or maybe one about Selvaria?

@Outlaw
The Selvaria one sounds pretty cool, but I will reserve that one for after I beat the game. I want to see her character unfold in the story first so I can make some accurate fanfic.

Oscar sounds doable. Who is his brother, is he playable or just part of his backstory?
I will read some of his back story later to get a good sense of his character.

@forevercloud may i give you a little constructive criticism?

While your story is very creative, smart, and played out well, there are a few things i think you could do better with. It is your sentence structure, you start many sentences with "subject - verb." Some examples, "she turned, she pondered, she gave, he stopped...." Subject- verb sentences can get tiring and take away from the good story you have. I think if you take the time and change up the sentences you will find you will come up with better ones.

Hope this helps you.

I appreciate all critisizm ^^! I saw all types of errors after I posted it. I didnt really proofread like I should have either. I think my contest entry was much better written then this one. I get stuck sometimes, mainly when I realize I am doing one of the following....

-using he/she way too much

-using names + said way too much(Alecia said, Alecia said, Alecia said, etc.)

I will take the time to rephrase some of my sentences for better understanding.

EDITED "The Lone Wolf Series" post.

Thx again Lightning! ^^

@forevercloud3000
i was joking, i also wrote a looooooooong fanfic the same day they announced the competition and i am hoping they wont refuse it for being long. and i didnt even finish it as i ended it up with the "End of chapter - 1"

I only read a snippet of your story, but first tip: There are other ways to describe marina aside from calling her Marina :p I scanned through your text and noticed a heck of a lot of "marina"-calling...

And you sometimes switch tenses >_>

(pm me your entry, would you, I want to know what I'm up against >_> Already submitted mine too ^^)

And I hope you all get banned from the compo from being 1 word over it all :p Because I was cursing when I had to stay within 500 :(