Not bad at all, but I feel like I may have missed some of the important dialogue.

I watched it,i got a few chuckles,didnt mind it. Kinda want to see what happens next be sure to post it up here.

oh and are you in it?

No. I was going to be in it but there was not time for that scene because the film had to be under 5 mins.

Thanks for the help so far everyone. I posted a link to the video on my twitter but I only have 10 followers. Follow me at: 

@XGsignalstar

I promise to follow whoever follows me. Also if the video hits 1 million views I win an I Pad. Not that I think it could hit that many nor do I want an I pad. Just saying.

My film is currently lagging behind in numbers. Need more views.

Currently in 9th place with 278 views. First place has over 800. Any suggestions on how I can win? I'm open to all suggestions.

Was pretty cool. The changes in ambient noise were probably the most distracting thing.

Edit: And the way to win? Cheat =P

Post it on 4chan /b/ and tell them it's a pornography.

How?

I watched, liked and subscribed.

I hope you win.