Good start, but you should make it less 360 biased, if you expect people not to complain and actually use it.
- remove Qore. It looks like you are trying to compare it to Live.
- Just list retail prices. List cheaper deals in a later section. (see live)
- You list the cheaper newegg price for the 360 controller, but not the PS3 controller?
- Add retail prices for Xbox hard drives
- Add price for PS3 headset
- Remove the D-Link adapter is faster than PS3 comment.