I'm suggesting you do the exact opposite; subtract, rather than add. Instead of recounting the entire scene where the problem you have with the game takes place and taking seven paragraphs to address two points, just quickly outline the problems and maybe spend a paragraph briefly describing the examples where the issues take place. For instance, if you think the shift in tone between the burning the wife's body and killing the troll is incongruous, something like this would suffice;

"The tone wildly shifts between the burning of Feye's body and the end of the first miniboss. It starts off somber, then becomes almost silly when Arteus spouts off a one liner worthy of a Saturday morning cartoon, and finally just embraces pure absurdity after the battle when Arteus runs up and starts stabbing the troll's corpse. It's hard to take the scene seriously when the characters' actions and dialogue are all over the place tonally."

That's not going to be a perfect example, as there's almost assuredly something I haven't included in there that's an issue to you, but I think it gets the point across. It sums up what I believe is one of your complaints in a succinct paragraph that's easy to read, and people won't simply skim over.

I don't have any problem with people giving me a hard time. If I'm to have my opinion then others should have theirs. That's how I've always been and always will be. Arguing who is right and who is wrong only gets tiresome for me when, for whatever reason, some people begin attacking the person and not the point. 

Yup but sadly most of the time that's how it ends up when you criticize something people feel 100% you HAVE to like. They'll go personal. That is very tiresome you're correct.

It's the mechanics surrounding and presenting those themes that are at fault. As I said, it is a game after all and I do recognise there has to be some tutorial moments leading up to the first difficult fight. Moments are set up in order to create a feeling or emotion in the player that makes the pay off more memorable. If the journey between those moments is too long or not re-enforced tonally, either through clever gameplay dialogue or contextual animations, then the pay off doesn't work because the player has lost that emotional narrative.  He/she is no longer connected and the final pay off feels jarring. 

That's not even remotely true.

OP brought up the map sucking and then some portions of questionable writing.

Its better than just a "good game", if it isnt a master peice, what games truely are?

This is like saying BoTW is just a "good game" btw, even if that game probably took less work than God of War did.

That's an absurd comparison. He's talking about central story elements/exploration, which are present regardless of how you play the game, and not something as easily subverted as adjusting the difficulty to make bosses harder.

Reminds me of BotW. I could come up with a pretty decent list of potential improvements for it and point out some flaws, but that does not mean it isn't a masterpiece.

Really, I'd be curious if anyone can think of a "masterpiece" that we can't think of ways to improve. I rather doubt it.

It is to me.

That's not cool dude. Age has nothing do to with the validity of an opinion. That's a prejudice, don't be like that ok?