Trunkin said: Hmm, well, I'll have to copy Spurge and say I'm no art aficionado either. Heh. The only thing I can point out is that her pupils aren't quite centered the irises. They seem a bit on the small side(I usually draw mine too big) and her irises aren't entirely round. From this angle they wouldn't be perfect circles, but they would be a bit more elliptical. Eyes are also quite reflective, so the light should be more clearly seen in her eyes as well, giving them a more glossy, life-like appearance. There are some good youtube videos on shading the eye. There's one in particular that I found quite helpful. I might post it here if I can find it. I'm sure Marucha, professional/goddess that she is, could give you some better pointers. :) |
Thanks for taking the time, appreciate it. Gonna make the modifications and upload it.
lol I probably seem so weird to you right now, but 'firsts' are always special :p