Zelda's Lullaby: VG Chartz 1st Round Contest Entry by ADM-89

http://soundcloud.com/adm-89/zeldas-lullaby-vg-chartz-1st

This is my entry. It was a previous recording I did, but I rerecorded almost everything with better equipment, added a few things and provided a better overall mix. Hope you guys enjoy it.

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That was fucking badass!

Thanks, hope others think the same. 

Navane, you just won me over. You picked a tune that hits close very close to my heart, and you played it wonderfully. I felt like you were playing it just for me. You executed the slides and the pace was incredible.

I like how the tune transitioned from soft guitar to hard guitar, it was a cool transition. Yet you played the soft and the hard in harmony and it sounded so good.

There are two things I noticed but they are minor, but I need to give it for you as feedback. There was some white noice behind the guitar track, I noticed it at 1:29. And the ending could be better, I know you can make it even better, it ended in a bit of a dud. But everything else was so beautiful.

Thanks happydolphine. I really appreciate the comment and constructive critisism. I heard the white noize as I was mixing it, but I got too lazy to re-record the rhythm again. I may actually go back and do another few takes as I think I can improve the mix even better. As I was listening to it again last night, I had a "duh!" moment. The reason why I felt that the powerchords sounded too compressed in the mix was that I didn't double track them. It's gonna make a world of difference after I'm done redoing that part. But since I already submitted this as my entry I'm not gonna go back and change anything since I already uploaded it. But I do plan on updating this sometime later after this round is over.

Also, I was kinda thinking the same thing with the ending. That shouldn't be too hard to fix actually, I'll PM you sometime after it's finished.

Please do, I will enjoy listening to it outside this competition. A great piece, you have a wonderful talent.

I'm glad that I'm out, all the other guys actually showcased genuine talents. ZeroFTW!

Nah, I liked your goAnimates. Just didn't enjoy the auto-plays. I would have wanted to see you move into the next round, but the judges and users decided.

(Just edited my post) Ninja yours.

Alright, next week starts today, but does that mean I have Friday to submit something, or do have until Monday?