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Forums - General - Sci-Fi fans and readers, please tell me what you think of this timeline that I created for my book? (LONG READ!)

c03n3nj0 said:

How far are you into the story?

I've wrote quite a lot, but I am now trying to rewrite it because of the whole Elyzium movie thing, or at least some of it.



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PullusPardus said:
c03n3nj0 said:

How far are you into the story?

I've wrote quite a lot, but I am now trying to rewrite it because of the whole Elyzium movie thing, or at least some of it.


The wha?

Did something come out that was basically the same thing you wrote?  



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I have to agree with most ppl here: time lines are nice and all, but I better have a good story. A time line means nothing if you don't have a story to tell it! take a look at this page: http://www.futuretimeline.net/ - there's a POSSIBLE time line for how things will go down, according to current research and technology. It states that the PS4 and Xbox720 will launch next year :P they predict when the oil will run out and when men will be able to upload their consciousness to the internet and stuff like that. Take some some inspiration from there!



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c03n3nj0 said:
PullusPardus said:
c03n3nj0 said:

How far are you into the story?

I've wrote quite a lot, but I am now trying to rewrite it because of the whole Elyzium movie thing, or at least some of it.


The wha?

Did something come out that was basically the same thing you wrote?  

yes . and it bummed me a bit... well not a bit a lot, i've been writing this for quite awhile, and I just discovered this 

http://gamrconnect.vgchartz.com/thread.php?id=145521&page=1#



I quite enjoy your timeline Pullus but I have a few questions that I thought of (I did read it in halves two days apart, so if I ask a stupid question I'm sorry :P).

You say we make a new sun called Luminous, but when did the old sun die out?
What storyline are you hoping to go for with this universe?
You mention early on in the story there are signs of life outside BP... but then don't develop that further in the story (just a bit of a missed opportunity I think)