I quite enjoy your timeline Pullus but I have a few questions that I thought of (I did read it in halves two days apart, so if I ask a stupid question I'm sorry :P).
You say we make a new sun called Luminous, but when did the old sun die out?
What storyline are you hoping to go for with this universe?
You mention early on in the story there are signs of life outside BP... but then don't develop that further in the story (just a bit of a missed opportunity I think)







