I've been drawing since I was in elementary school and drawing has been a passion of mine. Yeah im not Da Vinci or anything but I actually started out drawing cars. I got really good at drawing cars then somwhere aroung the end of Jr. High and High School I started drawing my own characters. I used to draw so much that my parents got mad at my and stole some of my work and hid it from me. I was drawing at school one time and my friend didn't like that I was drawing so he seized it from me and tore it in half. I was saddened. Later I will post some of my old stuff for comparison if you don't mind.

These are a couple of characters for a series that I want to make. A scanned version never looks like the original but yet at least you can tell my drawing style. In fact I only draw with a .5 mechanical pencil and I dont color.

Eris

Astro

Better than what I could draw.

Awesome drawings.

I also have to say, i love Eris' 2 main attributes. You are really good at drawing eyes!

My sister draws aswell so I'll use her pics as a point of reference. I can see that they are sketches but honestly I think that it can still need a little work. Try to round out the faces more, mostly Astro's. And work with shadow a bit more even when it's early sketches so that you get a better sense of depth.

I hope that's helpful because I dunno what style series you are aiming for but it has potential.

ur good at drawing the bodys but the heads look weird... u should ready put more detail in it like shading. lol i just want to take them and finish them :)

There are better than your other one at least.

Pic 1 (like this one the best):

• work on drawing hands.  Yeah, you're going for some sort of style but bad isn't a very good style
• Eyes look the best in this one probably because you're not looking dead on at them
• Like the shape of the faces
• THe girl has some insane shoulders and one huge arm
• The guys legs look good but the girls legs are too fat

Pic 2:

• I'm really not trying to sound mean but I hate the way you draw eyes.  It's fine to have your own style but they really are too big.  Add onto that they're so flat and close together and they just look wrong.
• hands again
• looks like you're looking at the nose from an angle but you're looking at the character dead on

Pic 3:

• see Pic#2 comments
• You always do well on clothes

And please don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to be an ass, I just believe it's much better to give actual critism than to blow smoke up someone's ass.

NewCloud, maybe you should try. I find that working together gives great results. Of course, when it comes to art it can be more sensitive.

Pretty good stuff, keep up the good work!

Thanks for the comments. I actually like it when people criticize (is that how you spell it) so I can use it for future reference. Please tell your friends to comment. And well actually . . . they're not sketches. Yeah I know they look rough but yup that's how I draw. I have more stuff but I won't post them unless I get a certain number of comments in this one.

Check out mines, on my sig I have most of them.
U should add colors and check proportions more, especally in the comparison between the head and the body, if you add shading like someone said they would look a lot better.
Keep working hard.