twesterm on 10 August 2009
There are better than your other one at least.
Pic 1 (like this one the best):
- work on drawing hands. Yeah, you're going for some sort of style but bad isn't a very good style
- Eyes look the best in this one probably because you're not looking dead on at them
- Like the shape of the faces
- THe girl has some insane shoulders and one huge arm
- The guys legs look good but the girls legs are too fat
Pic 2:
- I'm really not trying to sound mean but I hate the way you draw eyes. It's fine to have your own style but they really are too big. Add onto that they're so flat and close together and they just look wrong.
- hands again
- looks like you're looking at the nose from an angle but you're looking at the character dead on
Pic 3:
- see Pic#2 comments
- You always do well on clothes
And please don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to be an ass, I just believe it's much better to give actual critism than to blow smoke up someone's ass.
