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noname2200 said:
Snesboy said:
Hawkeye said:
Wow, that got really creepy and weird at the end and started to not make sense. How did they feed all those guards/residents? If most of the child laborers did nothing, and the animals did nothing, and the guards/mayor did nothing, how was there enough food?

 

Liberal/Socialist/Marxist/Democrat/Soviet society at it's finest my friend.

 

Heheh, nice.

And really Hawkeye, that's the plot hole that occured to you?

But yeah, the ending was pretty weak compared to the first nine chapters.

 

After reading the entire story, I quite enjoyed it.