Can you guys tell if my stories sound interesting?

[Alex_The_Hedgehog]

atomicfear said:

It's all about execution. Great ideas can be boringly told. With the right words, stylistic rhythm, and pacing you could make a story about eating a hamburger fascinating and compelling.  That being said, I'd read your stories if you wanted me to for more detailed feedback. DM if you want.

Thanks, man.

But for now my stories are all in portuguese. I need to translate them.