yo_john117 said:
Noes I failed Halo 3!! What mistake did I make? |
"prestigise" and "I personally can't thing"
Sorry. 
yo_john117 said:
Noes I failed Halo 3!! What mistake did I make? |
"prestigise" and "I personally can't thing"
Sorry. 
| yo_john117 said: It has finally happened!!! Halo 3, one of the best games this gen, if not of all time, has reached the prestigious amount of 10 million copies sold. I personally can't think of a more deserving game! Here's a toast to Halo! May you sell millions more and become the best selling HD game sold this gen!!!!
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There are missing commas, an extra space, prestigious, and think.
Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita
Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte
Sugu yoko de waratteita
Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo
I will never leave you
badgenome said:
"prestigise" and "I personally can't thing" Sorry. |
Right.
Also, "gen" isn't a real word, and "become the best selling HD game sold this gen," is redundant.
The only time you should 3 punctuation marks in a row is an ellipsis.
Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita
Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte
Sugu yoko de waratteita
Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo
I will never leave you
Hmm... I played that game a lot for about a month, had lots of fun, and then quit. But I have fond memories.
Also, far from being "one of the best games" of this gen, Halo 3 is a generic piece of shit. Probably your most glaring mistake, IMO.
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