That's true. 

Maybe I just don't "get" the jokes.

I got a few chuckles out of it. There was no real punch line, though.

I'm going to have to go with nightstriker on most of his comments.

well I just figured out what a punch line is.

The point of the joke is that ghost are lame, so I guess I'm just not doing enough to tie it up at the end.

there is a question marking missing in "you make up as you go don't you"

i think, another good one would be a ghost appearing in the middle of a base( you know they cloak until they attack) and pointing his nuclear mark laser, then everyone looks at him in fear,he says something like "die" or whatever and then the base call in and tell him that the nuclear missile is not ready yet and then he gets his butt kicked. Well is just an idea

i have played starcraft for ages and your joke is funny is just that i do like ghost and making fun of their dialog is not that funny to me, i find it really cool

oh oh, what about one with Ultralisk or guardian dump and a battle cruiser screaming "those are not ASTEROIIIIDS!!!"

what about a quierd marine in the Barracks?

@radha
First of all, your da best.

Now, to address your point about the dialog:
I think they are really cool too, but it always seemed like they tried really hard to make them cool.
It's like ghosts try to hard to be cool.

Anyway, I'm thinking about doing some dialogue revision.

haha a queer marine? Hmmm, I wonder what I could get away with in this contest.

USA has this thing now about gays in the military called "don't ask don't tell"

I wonder if I can milk that at all.