Those were awesome...!

Added it to my favorites...

^ Thanks a lot for the support everyone!

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It should be a prequel because the white book is pretty much a closed book. He doesnt escape does. My concern is what is a tie wearing guy doing in a Savannah in the first place and why was he being hunted down. Basically the story has to play out backwards.

^ yeah right from the start I thought that the fact he is dressed like an office worker could be developed into an interesting part of the plot. I think your right, another prequel would work better.

It works well. The composition and editing were solid however the running without a moving background was lame.

I think you could definitely chuck a Momento and do some backwards linear storytelling.

^^ without a proper animation studio with character tie downs and stands doing the moving running takes soo much work, especially whilst trying to keep the lighting constant in each frame by keeping your shadow out of the background.

But yeah I agree... its lame. your only the 2nd person to notice though so it should be good enough : )

edit: and now that I see your a director it makes sense as the other person to notice is a camera man lol.

I'm well aware of the technical difficulties :P

But as you said, 99% of people wont even notice, only industry people really.

And yeah I work in the Australian film and television industry, I'd be out of my job if I didn't notice things like that. Overall very nice work. Im a live action person myself, I don't have the patience (or the drawing skills!) for proper animation work beyond some motion graphics stuff I do.