I read the entire thing and enjoyed it. You have a good sense of humor. Unfortunately all that several people got out of it was that you need to learn how to indent.

Hardly anyone is going to read your post because it is likely to give a massive headache. Paragraphs are your friend not your enemy.

A bit long winded in my opinion but got to like the passion. The point is made that LBP is trying to move past the hardcore crowd, but WII is already doing that and to state the Super Mario Bros is not a fantastic game is taking it one step to far

Just read through it. It's good.

Your test would go better if you used paragraphs. People's attention drift with walls of text, which is why you're taught to use paragraphs in the first place. What you're doing now is like testing someone's hearing by having them listen for a quiet beep...in the middle of an artillery range.

Put alternatively, garbage in, garbage out. I approve of the intent, though...