VGPolyglot said: 今晩は!私は日本語で書きたいです。日本語を勉強します、誰も勉強しますか。 |
Just a couple notes.
you don't need the watashi ha in the second sentence. It is always assume that you are the subject.
Also, when you're talking about a topic, it's better to use the -tain desu ending. (kakitai~n desu)
Lastly, before a comma, you should get used to the -te form, as it flows slightly better,
nihongo wo benkyou shite, dare mo benkyou shimasuka?