kolbykooz on 14 April 2013
| DraconianAC said: First let me tell you that I'm blunt, and some people tell me my criticism is pretty harsh. Having said that, here are some suggestions you may consider; take them if you like. 1. I know you don't have a studio, but the bedroom background is lame. Too many people do it, and if you want to differentiate yourself, and take it a step further. (You can buy 3-4 yards of cheap bright green fabric, and learn Wax.exe to make yourself a green screen and possible picture slides.) 2. Type an outline of your topics, present it to your parents or friends. Present it to your mirror (many, many times), notice the facial expressions you like to improve or take out. 3. Your shows title states it's a gamer's report. Watch out for your bias opinions. Leave the opinions for the trolls who watch/read the news. (Whenever you say I/My in a sentence, you are basically adding bias to the news. It's fine if you want your show to be like a blog, not fine if you wish to report the news or rumors.) 4. Open you mouth widely when you speak, and slow down. You may wish to do some vocal exercises before talking into the camera. Picture the camera is if its your best friend and you wish to tell it a story, only make sure you rehearse that story a lot. 5. Present all sides to any rumor/story. Give info/links to your references, and try not to speak in absolutes. 6. Positive one. I leave this one last because I wish to congratulate you on having the balls to put your face out in the open. Not many people will do this, myself included. However, like an instrument, only practice will make you a better public speaker. |
Thanks so much! This'll all really help alot :) I definetly need to take the bias out!
I make videos that are sometimes funny I think?
