Okay I watched a few more minutes and basically have same advice as others. Cut the constant screen jumping (get through a topic at least), get a better background, and if this is a news review for week then leave your personal opinions out. Make it about the news not some Fox News "reporting" with personal opinions slipped in. Talking shit or putting down any of the big three harms your chances of mass appeal. If you don't like Microsoft and it shows in your show then you probably alienated that user base from ever caring to watch your show again. Some people watch things that they hate (Fox News, Howard Stern, etc) but I believe it would be in your best interest to leave your opinions out of the show unless you think you have enough talent as Stephen Colbert.
With some hard work and heavy polishing you could have a decent following. Decent first attempt but there is definitely a lot of work to be done.
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