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Rath on 12 June 2008
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a.l.e.x00 said:
Rath said:
Your actual reviewing isn't bad but some of your jokes and lines are pretty terrible.

'I'd rather clean up goose shit on a field'
'What a crapful of fuck platypus'

There were a couple of other ones as well that just stood out as not only not being funny but actually not making any sense either. You basically need to spend a lot of time actually working on individual lines rather than just on the entire script as a whole.

Also don't apologize after your lines, it just doesn't fit.

Did you have to find the two WORST lines in the review? And yeah, the apologizing part is lame. I'll fix it all.

Pointing out the worst bits is the entire point of criticism =P