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fkusumot said:
a.l.e.x00 said:
This is what I think:

9. Some parts are too gay.


I would avoid saying this.

Otherwise, the video is not that bad. What you could use is practice and a good editor. 

Since Kirby 64 is actually a nice side-scrolling platformer (although a little short) the approach that you're using isn't that coherent, i.e., making jokes about the game and then doing a 180 to comment on the strong points. AVGN showcases some absolutely horrible games and has fun with that. Yahtzee is a brilliant curmudgeon and his frenetic style is really hard to copy. Personally I'd like to see someone do some off the wall reviews in a Steven Wright "low key" style. One pro tip: don't use the word "secrete".


Thanks for the advice, but I must ask, why not use the word "secrete?"