Ganoncrotch on 04 August 2017
30 pages? I have to admit I found the OP hard to get through :( Sorry Ouroboros, I don't think I would enjoy your style of writing, If you wanted to pm me a link to it though I do proof reading on occasion and I'm not working at the moment, could offer you some advice possibly on it if you have any interest in that.
Like I said, I really have no interest in the story so the speak, just to see that it is written correctly, if that makes sense to you.
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