sundin13 on 12 April 2015
Watch out for saying the same word too many times close together. It starts making things sound jumbled.
Also, for most of the review it seemed like you were describing the game instead of reviewing it. Talking more about how this is different from previous entries would have helped, and more discussion on specific design choices would have made your review feel like more of a review and less of a summary. You lightly brushed on a couple things but you never delved into anything past surface level.
