Scifi fans, can you give an opinion about this prologue? is it too long/ grammar sucks / lame/ is it fun to read / confusing ...etc

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PullusPardus on 05 August 2014

Turkish said:
um what is this

http://storywrite.com/story/11524378-The-Passenger--ELYZIUM--Sleepless-Souls-Prologue--by-PullusPardus

Its me. obviously, same name.

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