Gilgamesh said:
It's a Grand Theft Auto game! why wouldn't it do good, 140K first week is not exceptable in my book, especially on a platform that has an install base of over 100 million consumer's. (^No grammar mistakes in that, you happy now?) |
The "W" in "why" should be capitalized, and that clause is a rhetorical sentence, so it needs a question mark. Additionally, it becomes a run-on sentence. "140k first week" is acceptable, but only just: please make it "140k in first week sales" to clarify what is the subject of the sentence. Additionally, there should not be an apostrophe in "consumers," as that is the possessive form.
And "you happy now" is a fragment.
Edit: And "exceptable" is not a word.
