It is still UNFINISHED, but the reason why I put it up on Youtube is because I don't like it, so before I finish it, I want the world to tell me why they know it sucks so that I can fix it, because right now, it sucks. IT REALLY SUCKS. The acting sucks. The script sucks. It's WAY TOO CLOSE to the AVGN in some parts, so I have to fix that, but I don't really know how to fix it just yet. It needs to get revamped again. Only problem is, I don't know exactly how. I'm still really confused. So please, watch my review, and tell me EVERYTHING why you know it sucks, so I can fix it. Complements are fine, if there's anything to complement, but criticism is far more important, because you learn from criticism. The video is influenced by the AVGN and iRate Gamer, and the others.

If it seems like I'm copying someone, it's by mistake, because I want my own identity. If I am, let me know what, so that I will change it. It's all a big mess right now, and you must understand that before I made this review, I had no experience in voice acting, video editing, writing scripts, or anything. I leaped into the entire thing, blind folded. It's not only one of the first Youtube videos I put on Youtube, but it's pretty much, one of the first movies I've ever made. Please tell me how I could do it better, but don't point out anything obvious. There are some screens missing, so there's no reason to point that out. Oh, I changed the script again, so there's lots of things that will be taken out, like a few seconds into the intro (black screen), I wont bother putting an image there, because I decided to take it out. I should, before putting it on Youtube, but I didn't.

There's other parts that just don't work, and are being taken away. Also, more jokes are being added, and more parts are being put in. I also have to add the live footage of me talking, and doing stuff, but that will come in later. Later, I'll put a theme song in, and I'll make it like a story. Maybe I'll end up chasing someone in a Sonic costume with my car or something, I'm not sure yet. The acting has to be better because you notice that I am reading the script. I am actually going to college soon to learn more about this stuff, so obviously, my videos wont be so crappy in the future. Anyways, please tell me what you think I should fix. I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks, and enjoy... If you can...

PART 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkqYHsFfBVA

PART 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRIe12KYQEg

PART 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLp6St-31lk

PART 4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KvVSFeBY6VM

PART 5

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yI5eu1nnVGc&feature=user

PART 6

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4auUw7r9QK0

Well, I got PART 2 in, now.

Yes Sonic the Headchog in next gen consoles really suck ass.

I must say, i did like Sonic Adventure battle: 2.

Did you like it, or criticise it also :p?

Sonic Adventure 2 is good. I didn't like Sonic Adventure 2: Battle. There's something missing from the port. I don't know. It just doesn't feel the same.

Lol, the videos are great and really well done.

Are they really? I don't think they are. I hate them so much. Please criticize them. I'd much rather have criticism than complements.

The part where shadow fell through the level made me lol :3

The last half of part two is pretty much just clips of the games^^; and I was totally waiting for a "to this" in there somewhere, maybe it's in part three?

Also, The kirby joke, good, but I didn't laugh cause I read your script ; ; I'm sure people who haven't will though, I love that joke. 'Cause it's so true :3

Ha, ha, ha. Thanks. Part 3 is up. I know I'm not at the AVGN level yet, but I promise you one day I will be there. I'm going to college soon to learn how to make the videos better, because they're still far too amateurish, certain things don't connect, and it could be a lot more funnier. Remember, they aren't finished yet. Probably 1/3 finished. I'm going to revamp them very soon, and make them a lot better.

Part 4 is now up.

Part 5 is up.