CGI-Quality said:
No need to apologize. I got it. You suddenly like to bitch about things more these days. I’d say you should just skip the game entirely and not buy anymore Quantic titles until they ‘meet your standard’.
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So, let's look at this ...
1: 'No need to apologise'. Perfectly reasonable and decent.
2: 'I got it'. Mmmm ... Curt and so suggestive of testiness. Is at odds slightly with the fist sentiment. We already have 'conflict' without it being spelled out. Take note Cage.
3: 'You suddenly like to bitch about things these days.' I would lose 'suddenly', it does't really add to the sentence because 'these days' does that job better. This is very Cage unfortunately. The interesting word here, and a brilliant counterpoint to the first perfectly reasonable sentence, is the word 'bitch'. It could have been 'complain' (neutral and objective, emotionally speaking) or 'moan' (Less neutral and from a more subjective and negative perspective) but you chose 'bitch' (A powerful word, perfectly nailing the conflict with the opening sentence.) We now know for certain the sentiment of the first sentence is meaningless. Again, Cage, take note.
4: 'I'd say you should just skip the game entirely and not buy anymore Quantic titles until they 'meet your standards''. 'I'd say' is a reasonable sentence starter here. It shows the writer understands this is merely a subjective interpretation of the conversation and that other people may have differing views. I would lose 'entirely' here though. You can't really partially skip something. You either experience it or don't experience it, unless you partake and then decide it's not an experience you want to continue with, in which case 'skip' isn't the word I'd use. At the very end we have 'meet your standards'. Without the quote marks there would be a certain degree of ambiguity in tone. Although the inclination would be to think it a possible dig. However, with speech marks included, it makes it a certain dig in the context of what was written beforehand. It was also the motive for this ironic response :)