Hi everyone! I recently made one of my first serious reviews I worked really hard on! I've never really done anything like this, so I know it isn't perfect, but I'm looking for any and all suggestions you guys have on how to improve! Also, did you guys agree with my thoughts on the game? Let me know C:

Link for mobile: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mt3016ADEho

Why don't you just put in your Youtube video a request that youtubers leave some helpful critique in the comments secton, advertising for critique here on a different site just comes across as trying to spam for views

Sorry, don't mean to come across this way! I've just asked here in the past and have gotten some good feedback that helped. Was hoping I'd get some again! :)

For me personally, I prefer Youtube reviews that are longer. I think that's the key liberty I enjoy with Youtube reviews. You get to make them as in depth as you want. But if you don't want in-depth or long content, that's fine. It just puts you in competition with like, an IGN review.

Yeah, I did notice for sure it was a bit short. I do want to go a bit more in-depth on the next one. I guess at the time of writing the script I just didn't really know where else to go with it, as I talk about story a lot in other reviews I do, which isn't really viable here, haha. Thanks though, I definetly wanna hit around 6-8 minutes from here on.

If I may jump in with a suggestion, I run a community of 30,000+ new/small content creators called NewTubers. If you're a Reddit user, you could acquaint yourself with the community there, but I recommend you check out our Discord server if you're looking for feedback and advice in particular! I'd go into detail with feedback if I had the time right now (just happened to catch the thread, don't have time to actually watch right now), but if you pop over there I'm certain you'll be able to get some really helpful advice from either me later tonight if I run into some spare time or other users much sooner than that! Usually it takes me a good 30 minutes start to finish to dig in and cover EVERYTHING, otherwise I'd do it right now!

Good to see another reviewer around here!

Hey thanks! I'll go check that out, sounds like cool community!!