This is a piece from a story that I'm trying to write. I darkened the picture above to show a little more detail but yeah thats from my sketchbook. Please rate!

You lack depth in your drawings... try some different poses and learn how to draw with different line tickness.. for example if a hand is more to the front draw a ticker line then the stuff behind it.. keep it up!

Better than anything I could do so I can't really complain.

However I think the point of the thread was to do-so so you can learn and get better. My only real advice is to make it feel more life-like. The characters could use a face lift.

I like it though. Wish I could draw better than stick figures that come out crooked.

When I look at it, it reminds me of Metropolis the anime.

good imagination.

This is probably the greatest drawing I have ever seen.

Watch the proportions, right now is not so good but if you practice daily and with discipline you will get a lot better because your imagination is right there, try downloading "How to draw comics the Marvel Way" its an excellent book.

the best way to learn to draw is to get a picture of a model and draw her 100 times.

By the end, you will be able to draw her perfectly from memory.

Then do that with all different poses, clothed, and nude.

It's like they're just part of the paper, nothing else.

The best part of the drawing is the robot's femurs, as it pops out.

6.3/10 I'd say.

And make your lines cleaner. The curve in your 'G' is misshapen. Get a compass or try to do quick movements with your pencil and erase to form a cleaner curve.

ow.. and maybe you should remove your real name from the paper before someone like WessleWoggle finds you in the real world.... Terence..

lol, that woman is so horrible.

feet, fingers,chest, forehead, arms, crotch, scarf thing, hair looks cool but too much focus on the detail of the hair. Instead of drawing hair like it actually is, (hundreds of lines), draw it how it looks.