It's like they're just part of the paper, nothing else.
The best part of the drawing is the robot's femurs, as it pops out.
6.3/10 I'd say.
And make your lines cleaner. The curve in your 'G' is misshapen. Get a compass or try to do quick movements with your pencil and erase to form a cleaner curve.
Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita
Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte
Sugu yoko de waratteita
Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo
I will never leave you







