During my off-time, I like to rewrite songs to make them quirkier. I redid Tik Tok and was wondering if I could get some opinions/suggestions.

Here's the instrumental:

Lyrics:

Wake up in the morning feeling like some fun

grab my wii-mote, I'm in the den, I'm gunna hit this kingdom

before I leave, call my friends with some importaint news

tell them the princess is kidnapped (friends) again? (me) no time to lose

(so now we're)

flying up in the sky (sky)

making them goombas fry (fry)

while trying not to die (die)

(drop down and)

sliding up on our bell(ies)

getting extremely mi(ni)

all while trying not to get bubb...l...y....

*Chrous*

Jump, Stomp! Miss the thwomp! Then the lava burns my romp

Distress, I won't rest, 'till we save the princess

tik tok, race the clock, don't forget the question block, though

(oh oh woah oh X2)

*Chorus*

Ain't got a gun in this world, but got plenty of jumps

ain't got no money in my pocket, spent it all on 1ups

and now the dudes are lining up, telling us to go faster

but we kick 'em to the curb unless they play like a master

(I'm talkin' about)

run away from the ghost (ghost)

try to collect the most (most)

gunna smack 'em if he startin to boast (boast)

(no now we)

go until we make our rounds (rounds)

or the koopas shut us down (down)

koopas shut us down (down)

ko-ko shut us (dwn)

*Chorus X2*

Bowser!

You pick me up, you throw me down

my wiimote shouts, yeah you killed me

with my hands up, you got me now

you got that sound, yeah you got me

I power up, I power down

my wiimote shouts, yeah you got me

with my shell up, put your hands up

put your hands up (up up up up up up)

Now the Yoshi's ain't hatched 'till I walk in)

*Chorus X2*

Opinions/suggestions, please! Be honest.

lmao that chorus bit cracked me up. Nicely done

Ehh...could it be for a song that's not annoying? And I've seen one for Modern Warfare 2 that's way better. I'll stop trashing on your thread, but still...

that's really messed up, he likes the song and you say "That song is pretty annoying" wow montana just wow..

Can I get a link to the Modern Warfare 2 version?

I dunno. He seems pretty good at doing this, I'm just wishing it wasn't that song of all songs.

And Leo-J, I like you. You and I are good pals, and I know you like my posting. Let's just agree to disagree about all things regarding music.

RCTJunkie: Yeah, lemme find it (after playing some MW2 first).

why should we disagree to all things music.. I love the beatles

Because we like very different things regarding music, and I don't think you really like The Beatles that much.

Video:

The voices sound HORRIBLE, but then again, same with Tik Tok.

hmm. I think the difference is that they were to stray farther from Ke$ha's lyrics to sound more original. I'll try that next time.

Thanks for the honesty.

Glad I could help. Didn't want to sound too rude