During my off-time, I like to rewrite songs to make them quirkier. I redid Tik Tok and was wondering if I could get some opinions/suggestions.
Here's the instrumental:
Lyrics:
Wake up in the morning feeling like some fun
grab my wii-mote, I'm in the den, I'm gunna hit this kingdom
before I leave, call my friends with some importaint news
tell them the princess is kidnapped (friends) again? (me) no time to lose
(so now we're)
flying up in the sky (sky)
making them goombas fry (fry)
while trying not to die (die)
(drop down and)
sliding up on our bell(ies)
getting extremely mi(ni)
all while trying not to get bubb...l...y....
*Chrous*
Jump, Stomp! Miss the thwomp! Then the lava burns my romp
Distress, I won't rest, 'till we save the princess
tik tok, race the clock, don't forget the question block, though
(oh oh woah oh X2)
*Chorus*
Ain't got a gun in this world, but got plenty of jumps
ain't got no money in my pocket, spent it all on 1ups
and now the dudes are lining up, telling us to go faster
but we kick 'em to the curb unless they play like a master
(I'm talkin' about)
run away from the ghost (ghost)
try to collect the most (most)
gunna smack 'em if he startin to boast (boast)
(no now we)
go until we make our rounds (rounds)
or the koopas shut us down (down)
koopas shut us down (down)
ko-ko shut us (dwn)
*Chorus X2*
Bowser!
You pick me up, you throw me down
my wiimote shouts, yeah you killed me
with my hands up, you got me now
you got that sound, yeah you got me
I power up, I power down
my wiimote shouts, yeah you got me
with my shell up, put your hands up
put your hands up (up up up up up up)
Now the Yoshi's ain't hatched 'till I walk in)
*Chorus X2*
Opinions/suggestions, please! Be honest.
WHO IS JESUS REALLY?
