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BTW, those examples I gave, if you want to know how to do them competently, here goes.

First of all, Rey should not have got herself out of the restraints. You can have it where Kylo is having trouble seeing into her mind, but DON'T have her reverse the damn probe. Finn and Han should have been the ones who free her, and we see she is obviously exhausted from thwarting Kyle's probe. As for the Kylo fight, show him actually being affected by that blast to the gut. He's stumbling around, barely keeping up with Rey, while flailing his lightsaber wildly, with Rey still having some trouble blocking/parrying his blows. Maybe have her plead with him that she doesn't want to fight him in this state.

As for TLJ, Luke should have actually trained her. At the end, when she's outside the blocked path, she hears the Rebels frantically pleading for help. She concentrates extremely hard. The boulders begin to move slightly. Their cries for help echo in her head. She uses everything she has in her. She moves only half the boulders before she drops to her knees and then passes out, but it is enough that they can escape by crawling over the rest. Po and Finn quickly run to her limp body and carry her on board the MF.

Easy. No more MaRey Sue.

Last edited by thismeintiel - on 13 January 2018