MUST SEE: Video Game Review of Super Smash Bros. Brawl PART 1! DONE BY ME!

[Hawkeye]

you say "so the intro starts" noramlly, and then "and I must say, it looks BEAUTIFUL" sounds very sarcastic. Figure out a different way to emphasize words.
lol at "starfuck". I know you are being seroius and your review is good, but people might think you are being sarcastic and making fun of the game.