a.l.e.x00 on 12 June 2008
| Rath said: Your actual reviewing isn't bad but some of your jokes and lines are pretty terrible. 'I'd rather clean up goose shit on a field' 'What a crapful of fuck platypus' There were a couple of other ones as well that just stood out as not only not being funny but actually not making any sense either. You basically need to spend a lot of time actually working on individual lines rather than just on the entire script as a whole. Also don't apologize after your lines, it just doesn't fit. |
Did you have to find the two WORST lines in the review? And yeah, the apologizing part is lame. I'll fix it all.
