Eh, I didn't listen to it, but I listened to the Sonic one.
I agree, you need to find your own way of writing. A good tip (I think) is just write down the first things you'd say for a review if you were telling someone about it. Then do touch-ups and stuff, and bam :3 there you go.
The Mother 3 Fan Translation is done! Everyone go get it right now! (Mother3.fobby.net)
Play Earthbound for the SNES ; ; Do it, it's awesome!
Proud participater of this year's Wii Secret Santa event! Hopefully you'll join the merriment next year!
Link below because I fail at embedding urls.
http://www.vgchartz.com/forum/thread.php?id=51169&page=1