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It feels I am reading an over-complicated and tedious scientific or philosophical essay poorly disguised as a story. Sorry to put it that bluntly OP, but that's how it felt to me. Sometimes - not on every chapter, mind you - it's like I'm reading Atlas Shrugged, except written by the point of view of an overpowered Rick, the scientist from Rick and Morty.

Besides, beings of extreme power rarely make for interesting characters, specially one with little to no bounds such as your main character. Even silver age Superman managed to keep himself somewhat interesting because he had a clear moral code, people he cared about, and, of course, his equals to oppose him.

Edit - I don't like being prospective instead of descriptive, but I would consider to make any science fiction or fantasy work more down to Earth on scope.  Nothing relevant is hardly ever lost on a lower scale, and the power of the story, and the concepts or messages it may try to convey, do remain the same, or are even improved.