New Script. Like, or dislike?

[a.l.e.x00]

Thanks.

I will tell you what is wrong with my script.

It's unbalanced. Dry of humor. Some of the jokes don't make sense. It's way too close to the Angry Video Game Nerd. What else? Oh yeah, it sucks. And I mean, boy, does my script suck. That's not the worst part though. No. The worst part, is when I do the voice acting. Man, oh, man, I either talk too fast, or too slow, and the volume jumps, high, and low. I'd rather listen to Alvin the Chipmunk on crack, than to listen to my voice overs. They're so bad.