What do you think of this paragraph for my review?

[Zkuq]

I can't really read that without some paragraphing. I read about two fifths of it and quit. You may have a point there but I don't know. Swearing doesn't make it unreadable but there's too much of it too. Please, paragraph it and I might read it.

Of course you don't care about me not reading it, needless to say.