I don't like the narrative talking to self stuff, it reminds me of poor american TV writing... CSI type show... I'm going to do A, B C now because the audience won't be intelligent enough to work out what it all means so i need to tell them.
It did look a much better demo though, very nice indeed. Also seems less grainy than some of the ones they have show, the distant city (where she just stands up after falling) looked awesome.








