lol.. Wine.. who drinks wine from a fridge.. but yeah your sentences can be written slightly different to make them better.
Another giant of a man, fully bearded, short of hair with a bit of gray around his facial hair slowly and calmly entered the room, the towering man was dragging david’s lifeless body from his shirt, he was in a black shirt and a jacket, black trousers carrying a sniper rifle around his back.
So you're describing him, then describing his actions, then describing him again..
Iggy heard over a dozen gunshots accompanied by screams all around him, it was too fast for him to react he doesn’t know where the attacks are coming it was too dark for him to see, he could only see the tied man smiling, muttering “Carrion” as he leaned his head toward the right he saw Ron twitching lying on the floor bleeding with a knife wound to his throat he was already dead. then everything stopped, there was a cold, dead silence, no gunshots, no screams.
Here it's too dark to see yet he sees Ron and the tied up man? make it "he doesn’t know where the attacks are coming from and only could see..."
Face the future.. Gamecenter ID: nikkom_nl (oh no he didn't!!)
