Sevengen said:
if the main point of the OP was about innovation, well then, maybe I would have written more about the X1 being innovative.. maybe even put that in the thread's title. |
lol
Let's go back to elementary school. Remember the sandwich?

That's how the op is structured, more or less. Here's your conclusion.
"The PS4 is the more powerful, less expensive machine; the Xbox One is the more interesting and forward thinking alternative.
Price or innovation?
Innovation always wins in the long run.. would you be reading this on your tablet or smartphone if it didn't?"
According to pretty much any website:
A conclusion should
- stress the importance of the thesis statement,
- give the essay a sense of completeness, and
- leave a final impression on the reader.
Silly me for assuming your conclusion included the main point of the OP.







