Your thoughts, is this good?

[Joelcool7]

Hey fellow VGChartians 

So I am still not as active as I'd like to be in the community. But I wanted to get your expert opinions, some of you might or might not know I began attending Vancouver Film School to become a Transmedia Producer. I have sincerely missed the daily rants of many members who are gone, covering the walls with text. But this is what I am doing now.

Here is the trailer for my first short film and I would like to hear your personal feedback. It was a school project so it's not Hollywood quality or anything. The film tells the story of a young girl from the midwest who travels to Hollywood in hopes of seeing her dreams realized. The film is currently being submitted to festivals so I don't have the full version available yet. But the trailer and official FaceBook page are below.

I was even developing a game for the film, but ran into legal complications.

 

Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=94HH2jgMBwo

FaceBook Page: https://www.facebook.com/StarlightStarbrightCompendium9

 

What is your honest feedback? The game was going to be awesome unfortunately I can't discuss it because the gameplay mechanics are unique and not currently done in the industry. You know how things are when you have something not currently being done by anyone, you keep that wrapped up like fort knox!