theprof00 on 17 February 2012
| mike_intellivision said: Me thinks the author is trying to be too serious and too egocentric. He did some academic-type writing on video games eight years ago, so this is not the case of a college student complaining. Rather it appears to be someone who wants to be a professional writer complaining. Ironically, this appears to be written to appeal to jaded college gamers as serious scholarly writers don't use the word "sucks." Mike from Morgantown |
Maybe he's being stylistic? Perhaps that "sucks" was an aside in which his childhood speaks its mind, however immaturely.
I think you need to address the points rather than his writing. Unless you have no problem with what he wrote, just how he wrote it.
