RolStoppable said:
I have nothing against adjustments to make it flow, but adding things like "in my eyes" makes it look like I am afraid to say what I think and that you want to protect me from the mods. Likewise, adding words like "heck" for increased effect to a particular statement is also wrong. Stop listening to darth. |
That's cool. I edited the OP to remove some of that stuff. I didn't think it would make that much of a difference.
Well, it is the first thread. There were always gonna be difficulties