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theARTIST0017 said:

P_chan said:

I think they look pretty good except for the girls head.

go into more detail please

Looks to me as thought the hair on the front and top of the girls head is not really attached to her forehead.  You can see the line of the forehead from just above the eyebrows but then the hair seems to sit out beyond the bounds of where we would reasonably expect her head to be.