wfz on 12 July 2010
Your voice is so much louder than the rest of the instruments that it almost sounds more like karaoke.
I love the instrumentation in your song, but I feel like your voice was too smooth..and you sang too slowly to go along with such a fast beat. Your sentences were short and you spoke them so slowly and clearly and smoothly that it didn't feel like it fit at all. I felt like you were stretching yourself over as much of the song as possible, like spreading peanut butter too thinly on a piece of toast.
I hope that helps you somehow.
