| Seece said: Why don't you make a fantasy nintendo comic, or one that DOESN'T bash the industry/competitors? I know you're stance on the subject, but I'm right in that it's only going to be people that think the same as you that will ever enjoy these. |
How does this bash the competitors at all? Pleas enlighten me here as I don't see it. I also don't see any ego massaging either. It is a caricature of the typical reviewer/interviewer reaction to Nintendo games. A lot of "too cartoony", "needs to be more realistics", and Pachter's anual prediction of a Wii HD. It doesn't even compliment Nintendo on anything. I slags parts of the industry, but not in a way that insults or compliments any of the hardware or software manufacturers.
I have to agree with Khuutra that it is a bit too long winded. Comedy always works better when you can get a few quick jokes in. The final punchline was good, but you had a bit too much build up. You could probably condense the whole of it down to 3 or so panels.
Criticism aside it is good work. The drawing looks good by my standards and the joke behind it all is solid. Just needs a bit of refinement on delivery which is always the hardest part.








