Comic: Dr. Mario's Developer Wiicovery Centre

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DixieKong said:

twesterm said:

The art is quite good but as others have said you need to get better at just getting to the point and being done with it. 

If you insist on having really long drawn out comics, look up subtlety.  With a comic as long as yours you might not want to pound people over the head with the point in the first panel.

Well, compared to my previous two, this comic is quite short. I will try to improve, but sometimes I can't help but just cram in a lot of thoughts. I sort of make these like short stories more than comics I guess.

not to be a critic, but you could focus more on comedy, like the patcher one

instead of "testing the vitality sensor", why not "testing the secondary effects? or dangers? just for the lulz