Bad names , generic sounding game.
It's fine to be original and make original names, but don't make them a pain in the ass to pronounce or completely forgettable.
Also, out of pure curiousity, why do you say New Nintendo franchise? Do you expect to one day pitch this game to Nintendo? If so, don't waste you time because no game studio will ever take some random persons random idea.
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And that doesn't mean you should give up on developing your idea into a full fledged design and even possible future game made by you on your own or some completely indie thing, just abandon all hopes of Nintendo or some other developer taking it.








